Whilst still editing my short film I thought it would be a good idea to get my Media Studies class to watch and say what they liked or would change about the short film Sketch. All these comments are anonymous as they were all written on a piece of paper but a lot have helped me change a few aspects of my short film.
- At the beginning, have one foot being placed over the doors ledge to show she's ready to take that step into her daydream.
- Love the good use of shots and green screen, the song during the credits adds to the kick ass theme.
- Instead of a shoe, start drawing the sword as I was a bit confused. BUT I LOVED IT.
- The fading of the voices to the left and right speakers was brilliant! Made me jump.
- The Split screen - how did you do it?
- The music throughout is BRILLIANT!
- The part where Ben (the guy in the jet pack) is in the air is good!
- Every single bit done with thought and precision
- Felt so much longer than 5 minutes - effective use of time
- The shots are precise and the music adds really good atmosphere.
- Sound effects are really good when the drawings are done
- Filming is so clear + precise, flows so well! Love the music
- Hardly anything to critique! Excellent choice of music and shots. bit confused whether you draw the characters or not. Maybe show that you draw them in a shot?
- The music is really effective and the dialogue works well. Only thing I noticed was when the characters appeared the music could cut a bit quicker. Otherwise AMAZING! You could fade out the music at the end as well.
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